dark horse part 2 sixty seven moves

This great story is a creation of mine my many years ago I believe that I created it a long time ago way back in the end of the ninety's the idea came a English essay for my English lesson the character the dark horse was just a picture then I had no idea of what I was going to write about. on this occasion I have invited my two character Lucy and Benjamin in to the story in my first attempt to create the Dark horse it was just the Dark horse nothing else, This is my second version part two the same idea different story. with a few added extras the raven and its new attitude. in the end all is well.